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I found a flash maker that could work as a corrupted gemsona maker, if anyone asks I can tell you
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Appearance

[] They have a rare hair/fur colour
[] Their eyes are an unusual colour
[] This happens to be red
[] Their eyes change colour
[] (if a female) they have large breasts
[x] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[] They have lots of friends/no friends
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[x] They have a guardian spirit 
[x] Some part of their body glows (only when using aura or under uv light)
[] They are emo/cutesy
[] They have wings 
[] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear

Subtotal: 3

Relations

[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth  
[x] They have an evil nemesis (Tanzanite)
[ ] Who is their sibling
[] They are from a very poor/lowly family
[x] They are from a very rich/royal family (very high ranking gem)
[] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[] They have lost one/both of their parents
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death/s
[] Who were killed by the OC's arch nemesis
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] So they ran away from home, and somehow fell in with a famous hero, or bumped into an infamous villain who promptly became their arch nemesis
[] Their parents were fine, but they ran away from home anyway, seeking adventure
[x] They look much younger/older than they really are. (Do gems EVER look their age?)
[] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[x] They are currently in a relationship
Subtotal: 7

Race/Species

[] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[] But they struggle to be good anyway
[] They are a mythical creature
[x] They are an alien
[ ] They are part mythical creature
[] They are part alien
[x] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood (to be fair the diamonds as assholes to all organic life so that is to be expected)
[] They are a mythical creature/alien who was raised by human parents
[] And they grew up thinking they were human
[] They are the last of their kind
Double your points if they are descended from two or more kinds of mythical creatures/aliens
Subtotal: 9

Powers

[x] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc (Telekinetic only)
[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[] They have a special ability/power
[] But they don't know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift (not counting this because all gems can do that)
[] They are immortal(as long as they are not shattered anyways)
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc. 
[] They have a 'special type' of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[x] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
Subtotal: 11

Mentality

[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They talk about their struggle to stay sane a lot
[] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities
[] They are very intelligent
[] They are not smart, but in a funny way, and somehow always manage to find the hidden switch/secret door
[] They have hallucinations
[] They are very mysterious/dark
[] They are very lively/happy
[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly  
[x] They are very patient
Subtotal: 12

Miscellaneous

[] They are physically strong (not checking because all gems are more or less)
[x] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit. For example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[] They have a rare/unusual name
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They are connected with a certain element
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[] They are hiding from someone/something 
[] They have a rare blood type 
[] They cry blood
[x] They are from a different country to where they live (lives on homeworld but from a colony)
[] They are from a long line of ninjas/magical princesses/paladins/ad nauseum
[] They come from two such lines
[] Which have been at war for all of history
[] But are now at peace because of the OCs parents who loved each other in defiance of their families' hatred, showing them there was a better way 
[] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy (sort of, the prophecy was more or less “don’t mess with the main characters of the show or else”)

[] They are 'the chosen one'
Subtotal: 14

Total: 15


Point Reductions

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless
[] They are stupid, in an unfunny way
[] They are unattractive
Total Reduction: 0


Final Total:  15

[Comment: There are some things I didn’t check off due to that just being part of the race he’s from but other than that I feel this is fair

<5 -Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. No reason a character scoring this low can't be a a fascinating and exciting character, but generally if they are scoring this low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.

6-15 -Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue
You probably need to tone your character down; characters that score this high tend to annoy people.

26> -Mary-Sue




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A lot of people think Lumina Flowlight and Void are just Illumina's light and dark halves but really it's a lot deeper then you'd think from a mario party clone

I forgot to mention this in the video but the mark on void's cape isn't tied just to him but all the Precioustone Guardians and it is symbolic to their 3 forms, Jewel, Passive and Battle. Lumina doesn't have this mark because she is younger and needs Void to go into her battleform AKA Illumina

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